Positive Remarks to a website
Positive remarks is a statement that give a writer a happiness reading the feedback of the visitor to his/her created website.
Let me introduce the www.awwwards.com, where I selected a web page to give my 10 positive remarks, and a 5 positive remarks but needs an improvement.
I choose the web page of Mike L. Murphy.
10 positive remarks (Mike L. Murphy)
- Text
The text was very simple, but it has an impact to the reader. It is attractive that catch my eyes, it is not hard to read and is only simple to sight.
2. Image — the image use by this web page was very nice and it rhythm to the color of the page that make it more nicer to scroll and read.
3. Qoute — encouraging qoutes. It’s really show how full of values the web page is. It really make you encourage to read more and scroll more.
4. Chapter
A very impressive idea. It makes the reader to back to the chapter he want to, by just clicking this tab “o” with an equal sign inside. And it will show the all chapter of the page.
5. Color — it has a lot of negative space in inserting a white text and color gold around the letter, that’s make the web page awesome.
6. Social Link — in just one tap, you will delivered to their social account by clicking the social media icons. It was very interesting idea.
7. Header — the header is stick in its area that until you reach the end you are with, that you can easily click the icon that will perform its function. Keep us surprising.
8. Audio — this web page is not a normal web page, it has a background sound that will play until you met the end of the web page, but if you are bothered by the song you can just easily turn off it to the header, and click the icon that symbolize a sound. And there you go, it is off or on. Very brilliant idea, that can keep his reader to be comfortable while reading.
9. Transition
The transition was very outstanding, it really show how he good to his work and job.
10. Animation — the animation of this web page was simple but stunning. It allows a web page to become interactive or alive.
The 10 above is for me, has a right to give a positive remarks.
How about you? visit the www.awwwards.com and select your web page and give his a 10 positive remarks from his work.
5 remarks for improvement
- Sensitivity — it will be more smooth if the sensitivity when scrolling the page has a little bet slow that we can stop to the right word and the right angle.
- Time — the transition and animation was good, but the time of it is very that when you scroll more you will feel dizzy.
- Internet connection — it was unfriendly to the visitor that have a low connection. It made you mad if you will try to read it, it will only load and stop.
- Information — it will be better if has the search bar where you can get the info or maybe a side bar that will show the other information.
- Transition of words — it make a user experience not good, because having a lot of moving words make us dizzy like we drink a beer.
That is the 5 remarks for improvement for me.
how about you? tell me your opinion?
Disclaimer:
To fulfill our activity on our HC1 subject, our Instructor give this activity to learn more about the website. If you are a professional or maybe you know how to create a website, and you read my article and you find it wrong and misinformation, I am sincerely asking for your apologize. I will accept your comments and tips.